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[another madness movie]

Yeah umm...

You, my friend, need to pester around with flash a little more, because this wasn't so good.

Don't kick up the "You have no Flashes STFU GTFO" stuff, just because I don't have any Flash doesn't mean I can tell what is good from bad. You shouldn't judge people like that, it's stupid.

Anyways, some colors would be nice. Uhh, feetings? DO NOT TWEEN. Madness is actually fbf'd, with only a couple tweens on some objects here and there.

Tweening can be good, like with Madness Dream, but you have to make the tweens so professional to pull that off.

Seriously though, mess around with Flash before you try to animate stuff like this. And, get some better sprites, as in, get an art class, as in, learn to not use lines to draw stuff.

Please try to improve on some of this stuff in your fourth thing, if that happens.

iLLiCit-JmBd responds:

i respect your opions unlike fap-rag wiiporter up there you know when to stop. and thatks for the constructive critism, i appreciate it, now i have to kill wiiporter!!

[Madness Neurosis Collab]

I can only say... =D

First thing, add names above the comics and extra's! I was having trouble telling which extra's were who's. Also, the Collab itself was =D. Smashed Smurf, Xraider, DaVeB0T, d00dfayz, and DayDayX were my picks.

Smashed: Smoothness

Xraider: Smoothness, action

DaVe: Smoothness, humor

d00d: Humor

Day: Just liked it

I'm not saying I didn't like the others, just these ones were the one that stood out for the reasons posted.

The other's need work in some places.

Link: Speed, foot movement

YK: Head placement ( slouch the heads, don't put them on top of the bodies), movments ( they sort of, skip in some places, just add a little more movments to them)

Wolf: Blood ( the ending blood is blechh), animation ( isn't so good, skips like YK's), head palcement
(ususally heads cover up the ties on 1337 bodies, the two little buttons should be showing only)
____

Also, good job on getting Anzio (Marshall) in on the second one. He's definately going to help out the second one.

I wish you luck on the second collab, :)

YK-Blaze responds:

thanks but in the title: "I can only say... =D" lol you say much dony ya? lol anyways thanks a lot

[i plead the fifth COLLABB]

no, no, no, NO

These are no good unless they have something made in flash. Add a flash trademark, and I'll think about giving a 10, k?

sigonz responds:

hoW ABOUt noO!

[Madness Inaguration]

Awesome, but needs a bit of work

Awesome job, Link! It was quite nice, and there was quite a bit of humor in ther aswell, but the only problem I would find are walking and the speed. You may want to use an audio program and tweak the music, the guns totally blanked out the music.

First of all, the walking was very quick, and quite bad throughout. The characters seemed to bounce too often and the feet were almost invisible becasue they were moving too quick. Definatly work on the walking in number 2.

The next thing is speed, it moved a bit too fast, and some movement seemed a bit lifeless. I'd say work a bit on how quick things are moving, try to move the objects just a bit less to make it go at a good speed.

Also, at the end, the bars get messed up after Freddy was thrown in, they looked like they were chopped off. Also, the v-cam was messed up right at the end, when smurf makes his appearence.

Appart form those things, this was awesome. Wish you luck on the next one and any other flash works.

And one other side note: What about the 1337sheet? Is that ready yet?

LittleLuckyLink responds:

I know, the bars messed up, but I was too sick of taking 40 minutes to export it.. And the 1337 5H337 will be done soon..

[Madness Unloaded Ep:1]

Woah... wtf?

Wow... well, I'll start here, it's completely horrid, if anything. First of all, the guys was tweened all they way through, Madness uses tweens and FBF, mostly FBF.

Also, the guy is partially green, wtf?

And as the dude below me said, Madness is filled with genocide and killing, Jesus, and evil clowns with guns, and Christian Bale.

I'd suggest next time, look at what you made before you submit, becasue whoever judged this must have been hit in the face with a fireplace.

Best that you learn a bit about animating before plunging into the deep end. Also, I lol'd at how you go around calling people idiots, it's just so freaking hilarious.

:)

PicoZX responds:

Shut up.
You should know that guy is green.
The only thing hilarious is this review.
The next episode will have blood!

[[Madness]Repploussation]

Your kidding, right?

Ok, I don't know where to start, so I'll start here. Repploussation is not a word, Krinkels' names are real, look at a dictionary, you'll find all those words. Second, the BGs moved. That is a no-no. And-- you know, screw the the nice review, this just plain sucked. Problems:
Choppy
Wounds and BG's moved
Falls took too long
Shots took tooo long
The movie has a bad plot

PLease, for the love of god, don't submit anything on Madness day.
Remove this, it's bad.

cashleycool responds:

remember matt2k7 did'nt make this

[Madness Combat Remix]

Hmm...

I was both dissapointed and satisfied. The animation was of course, your best animation to date, but it also wasn't as kick-ass as it looked before.

At times it was confusing, weird, funneh, and more funneh. One last question: 13three7, coming soon, or coming never?

g

JimmyDot responds:

madness is gayyY

[Madness Accretion]

Wow...

First, no feet movement. Second, the head are too high off the bodies. Third, movements are very choppy. Fourth, dieing was too stiff. You really fucked up on this. Really, I'd suggest you try a little harder before submitting to NG. This really blows. Sorry, I suggest you take more time and watch Madness Frame by frame and observe the movements, then practice around in flash a little bit and make some tests. Then put it into a full tribute. If you want help, fell free to PM or add me on MSN.

There were good parts. I like how the sidekick waves to his zombie agent. I like the ppster " Watch out! There's a guy with a gun!"

Really, practice moar.

orochimaru556 responds:

For such a small score and remarks, i was about to mark this as a not helpful..

but it really did help me A LOT..

I have been studying slow downed madness..mostly because the Wii sucks at flash...and observing how to make the movements better...thanks, i will definately have a better madness tribute for september!

[Madness Termination]

Speechless...

Dude, this is just awesome. THough it had a lack of guns, the melee fights were very good. The backgrounds were very detailed. The movement is fluid, but not enough foot movement. I liked the wounds, they were cool. The music was a good choice. The maskign and such was very nice, and I liked the movments with the V-cam.

Improve on walking a bit, and it should be good. The style is very nice, and lol at the extra scene.

JonBro responds:

Thank you for the intelligent review!

I'll work on the foot movement =)