I can only say... =D
First thing, add names above the comics and extra's! I was having trouble telling which extra's were who's. Also, the Collab itself was =D. Smashed Smurf, Xraider, DaVeB0T, d00dfayz, and DayDayX were my picks.
Smashed: Smoothness
Xraider: Smoothness, action
DaVe: Smoothness, humor
d00d: Humor
Day: Just liked it
I'm not saying I didn't like the others, just these ones were the one that stood out for the reasons posted.
The other's need work in some places.
Link: Speed, foot movement
YK: Head placement ( slouch the heads, don't put them on top of the bodies), movments ( they sort of, skip in some places, just add a little more movments to them)
Wolf: Blood ( the ending blood is blechh), animation ( isn't so good, skips like YK's), head palcement
(ususally heads cover up the ties on 1337 bodies, the two little buttons should be showing only)
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Also, good job on getting Anzio (Marshall) in on the second one. He's definately going to help out the second one.
I wish you luck on the second collab, :)