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[Tricky Madness 3]

Good job ruining a possible TM3

If krinkels ever wanted to make a TM3, you just ruined it, by making... this!
>:(

Wyattfilms responds:

good

[another madness movie]

Yeah umm...

You, my friend, need to pester around with flash a little more, because this wasn't so good.

Don't kick up the "You have no Flashes STFU GTFO" stuff, just because I don't have any Flash doesn't mean I can tell what is good from bad. You shouldn't judge people like that, it's stupid.

Anyways, some colors would be nice. Uhh, feetings? DO NOT TWEEN. Madness is actually fbf'd, with only a couple tweens on some objects here and there.

Tweening can be good, like with Madness Dream, but you have to make the tweens so professional to pull that off.

Seriously though, mess around with Flash before you try to animate stuff like this. And, get some better sprites, as in, get an art class, as in, learn to not use lines to draw stuff.

Please try to improve on some of this stuff in your fourth thing, if that happens.

iLLiCit-JmBd responds:

i respect your opions unlike fap-rag wiiporter up there you know when to stop. and thatks for the constructive critism, i appreciate it, now i have to kill wiiporter!!

[One cheeseburger please]

So that explains my tumor

Thank you. :D

[Lets make a pie]

I lol'd

That made my day.

[Madness Neurosis Collab]

I can only say... =D

First thing, add names above the comics and extra's! I was having trouble telling which extra's were who's. Also, the Collab itself was =D. Smashed Smurf, Xraider, DaVeB0T, d00dfayz, and DayDayX were my picks.

Smashed: Smoothness

Xraider: Smoothness, action

DaVe: Smoothness, humor

d00d: Humor

Day: Just liked it

I'm not saying I didn't like the others, just these ones were the one that stood out for the reasons posted.

The other's need work in some places.

Link: Speed, foot movement

YK: Head placement ( slouch the heads, don't put them on top of the bodies), movments ( they sort of, skip in some places, just add a little more movments to them)

Wolf: Blood ( the ending blood is blechh), animation ( isn't so good, skips like YK's), head palcement
(ususally heads cover up the ties on 1337 bodies, the two little buttons should be showing only)
____

Also, good job on getting Anzio (Marshall) in on the second one. He's definately going to help out the second one.

I wish you luck on the second collab, :)

YK-Blaze responds:

thanks but in the title: "I can only say... =D" lol you say much dony ya? lol anyways thanks a lot

[i plead the fifth COLLABB]

no, no, no, NO

These are no good unless they have something made in flash. Add a flash trademark, and I'll think about giving a 10, k?

sigonz responds:

hoW ABOUt noO!

[Living dead world]

Very nice!

Awesome 1st movie! The drawings in this are very good, but the animation needs a little work. I'd suggest you look at tutorials on moving, like how to walk, move the arms, etc. for your future projects. I'd also suggest wokring a wee bit on the human drawings, unless that's the style you are using. Good luck on your next flash movies! :)

[Madness Onerosity]

>:(

Lagging dust lags. And good show.

jajajaja