Delta66's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Downfall of Jimmy]

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Awesome.

P.S. lol corn

[Madness Agitation 2]

Sweet!

This is freaking awesome. But who made the part with the the yellow shades guy? There is no name, yo. Also, is it supposed to stay at a black screen after Deuce's part? Nothing happens...

Also, lol at tom's googlepage.

And to gam3r, it's a tribute, you freakin' idiot. Have you noticed there is a page full of things like this?

[Madness Inaguration]

Awesome, but needs a bit of work

Awesome job, Link! It was quite nice, and there was quite a bit of humor in ther aswell, but the only problem I would find are walking and the speed. You may want to use an audio program and tweak the music, the guns totally blanked out the music.

First of all, the walking was very quick, and quite bad throughout. The characters seemed to bounce too often and the feet were almost invisible becasue they were moving too quick. Definatly work on the walking in number 2.

The next thing is speed, it moved a bit too fast, and some movement seemed a bit lifeless. I'd say work a bit on how quick things are moving, try to move the objects just a bit less to make it go at a good speed.

Also, at the end, the bars get messed up after Freddy was thrown in, they looked like they were chopped off. Also, the v-cam was messed up right at the end, when smurf makes his appearence.

Appart form those things, this was awesome. Wish you luck on the next one and any other flash works.

And one other side note: What about the 1337sheet? Is that ready yet?

LittleLuckyLink responds:

I know, the bars messed up, but I was too sick of taking 40 minutes to export it.. And the 1337 5H337 will be done soon..

[Madness Unloaded Ep.2]

Needs more work on it.

I'm probably wasting my time knowing you're going to tell me to fuck off, but this was actually about as bad as episode 1.

First off, take more time on the movie, I could have made something like this in a day that's better. Spend some months on it, a true flash animator needs time, patientence, and skill.

Now, there was no walking, you moved the guys around instead of making them walk.

The movements were very bad. tell me this wasn't shot at 12 fps. Madness is more around 30 at the most, it's what keep it very smooth looking. This wouldn't be a bad tribute if it was fixed up a bit.

Also, you can't reach that far back, even without arms.

You definatly need to take this back to a animating board and give it another go. And don't tell me this was a bad review, I just told you what was wrong with this.

If anything, practice, take a couple months the make it good, and learn to accept reviews, instead of flaming the people and call them names.

I seriously hope you will get better.

-Delta66

[Madness Unloaded Ep:1]

Woah... wtf?

Wow... well, I'll start here, it's completely horrid, if anything. First of all, the guys was tweened all they way through, Madness uses tweens and FBF, mostly FBF.

Also, the guy is partially green, wtf?

And as the dude below me said, Madness is filled with genocide and killing, Jesus, and evil clowns with guns, and Christian Bale.

I'd suggest next time, look at what you made before you submit, becasue whoever judged this must have been hit in the face with a fireplace.

Best that you learn a bit about animating before plunging into the deep end. Also, I lol'd at how you go around calling people idiots, it's just so freaking hilarious.

:)

PicoZX responds:

Shut up.
You should know that guy is green.
The only thing hilarious is this review.
The next episode will have blood!

[[Madness]Repploussation]

Your kidding, right?

Ok, I don't know where to start, so I'll start here. Repploussation is not a word, Krinkels' names are real, look at a dictionary, you'll find all those words. Second, the BGs moved. That is a no-no. And-- you know, screw the the nice review, this just plain sucked. Problems:
Choppy
Wounds and BG's moved
Falls took too long
Shots took tooo long
The movie has a bad plot

PLease, for the love of god, don't submit anything on Madness day.
Remove this, it's bad.

cashleycool responds:

remember matt2k7 did'nt make this

[Dad's at Work]

Ehh... animation's a bit... poor

You look like you've lost the charm you had in Dad's Home, the animation is a bit poor. Some of the drawings have some weird shapes, and don't look that good either. The old randomness was missing, I wasn't as random as Dad's Home either, but this was a good show!

I really liked the 3D effect you added in certain rooms, those were very good. I think music selection could've been better, I mean the music is alright, but it doesn't really set the mood as well as the Reeferman( or however that's spelled) song did.

Is dad related to Blockhead by any chance? I mean with the whole tounge thing and all...

Appart from those things above, this was something nice to run into on Front page. Wish you luck on the continuation.

[Captain Faggot #010]

Zero'd, but if you can do this...

Zero'd, but if you relly made a movie starring Captain Faggot in it, I would definatly 10 it. I also zero'd because he did not hit the spike, that is a federal offense to the law, you're going to get arrested.

[Madness Combat Remix]

Hmm...

I was both dissapointed and satisfied. The animation was of course, your best animation to date, but it also wasn't as kick-ass as it looked before.

At times it was confusing, weird, funneh, and more funneh. One last question: 13three7, coming soon, or coming never?

g

JimmyDot responds:

madness is gayyY

[Madness Accretion]

Wow...

First, no feet movement. Second, the head are too high off the bodies. Third, movements are very choppy. Fourth, dieing was too stiff. You really fucked up on this. Really, I'd suggest you try a little harder before submitting to NG. This really blows. Sorry, I suggest you take more time and watch Madness Frame by frame and observe the movements, then practice around in flash a little bit and make some tests. Then put it into a full tribute. If you want help, fell free to PM or add me on MSN.

There were good parts. I like how the sidekick waves to his zombie agent. I like the ppster " Watch out! There's a guy with a gun!"

Really, practice moar.

orochimaru556 responds:

For such a small score and remarks, i was about to mark this as a not helpful..

but it really did help me A LOT..

I have been studying slow downed madness..mostly because the Wii sucks at flash...and observing how to make the movements better...thanks, i will definately have a better madness tribute for september!