Delta66's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wall Avenger]

Smooooth

First word to come to mind when watching this: smoooth. This moves nicely, like Xiao Xiao.The review:
Graphics, good+smooth+sticks= greatness.
Style, Xiao Xiao-like style, along with some of your own nifty backgrounds.
Sound, I like how the song was in sync with the kills, and the noises were also timed out well.
Voilence, I would gaive it better if you made the blood instead of using the explode filter in flash(zoom in when a guy gets shot, and you'll see what I mean), but appart from that, the violence was good.
Interactivity, pause, forward, backward, play. No probs here.
Humor, ehhh.... sticks usually don't always have humor, and I really didn't see it.
Overall, nicely done. It was smooth, and has some good kills, though I really like the one where the guy gets chopped in half, and you see a bone and skin. I really think you should make your own blood and telport, they were either tweened or a filter. Also, I agree with the one guy, make the "Avenger" a different color, because the teleport made it hard to see who was the "Avenger" until the so-one-think-is-the-"Avenger" dies. Fix that up, and this will be cool. Good luck on any future flash.
P.S. Did you animate them with the brush tool, or line tool, becasue I'm debating over using the line tool or brush in my movie.

[Madness Elimination 3]

Very nice, but I have a question

Okay, this was one of the good ones, because of the fact that Steve could get hurt, but the question is, who was the one guy that came into the room with the zombie? He did not look like a qurd, was he trying to help, or did you just sort of put in a little filler or something?Anyways the review:

Nicely done, on my scale, a 4. Graphics, good, but I think that the guys are too big, I say you should shrink their sizes. Also, you should look into the feet, in the beggining, everyone ramdomly lost one foot, and there are a couple of dude who don't have feet. Style, Madness style, but your tribute just has a good story line and find it somewhat more better than the regular Madness Combat(no offense Krinkels, but I still ike yours a lot, finish up on the 7th) and it's good you drew most of everything. Sound, good, I liked it, and how the song streams along and follows the animation.Voilence, good, I like the fact that you made some weapons bloody, like when the guy in the start got stab and the sword had blood at the tip of it. I think you should of have gave Steve a reastion when a was slashed on the side in the start, he just walked around like he didn't have a wound. Interactivity, bios, play B's, Replay B's, no problem here. Humor, BG's, I like to pause and zoom in and read the the posters and other things. Overall, very good job, the animation is perfect the style is good, sound is synced(or however you spell that)bios, adn some humor twisted in, good job! Wish you luck on your new series, and the"Madness Surprise"*wink*.

Splurgle responds:

Yeah, I totally hear you dude. Thanks! =]

[Madness Tribute 2 part1]

Very good, but 1 prob

This was perfect, I mean the kills just leave me speechless, they're really good. The problem is that you're animating the part discconectivly, coonnect the feet in the next one, if you are not too far into it.Now the review:

Graphics, good, they are good, did you make the characters yourself or use a spritesheet?Style,well, it's Madness, and really, there isn't that much style if the are not your own characters. PM on how to make a madness charcter. Sound, well, add gun noises first of all, and secondly, I really think the techno songs relate a little better to Madness. Voilence, kills, the kills are very good, the agent who got half of his head blown off was good. You still need to improve the blood in some areas, I can't tell you where in particular, but I bet reviewer's will help you out. Interactivity, play button and replay. Humor, well, the fact that the feet are not connected is sort of funny. Overall, great tribute! Just fix up in the areas I told you and connect the feet, and this should be a kickass tributes. And a note to the other guy: Learn your english, and keep opinions like that away from authors, try to say it in a more better manner than saying"Fuck this shit, my eyes are coming out of my fucking head from these shitty graphics, and the feet are not connected,dumbass."(though these are not my thoughts on this flash at all). Wish you luck on finishing part 2 and any other parts/episodes.

[Madness Mini 2]

Feet.

You need feet.They would look a lot better with those.

[Kai assault]

Nice one there

I really liked it, when I first watched it, I never knew the ending, but you sadly gave it off by writing"A guy goes in to a com-blah blah blah can anyone or ANYTHING stop him?"Take off the anything part,becasue it sort of can give off an ending in a way.Also, I think you should have added on a couple of parts, like maybe having the guy shoot down some of the smiths and sort of stay in the room until the demon thing shows up, then he runs out the back door.Noe that that's out of the way,I'll get on with the review:

Good one there!Graphics,very good, it was good.Style,new style!I like how they look, but I like the original better.Sound, good in all, but the song, it just doesn't seem like something that would fit Madness, it's still good, but I would suggest using a song more fitting to madness, I can't suggest any songs though, sorry :(
Voilence, it seems to be missing blood.There's not enough splatter and not enough blood going around, that would be good for the voilence and for the graphics,because it would give the viewer more things to see then a BG with a maximum of 3 posters or so per room, but I don't know if you were aiming for the Redeemer and/or Avenger type BG's.Interactivity,very interseting play button, and a replay button and quality changer buttons.Humor, a gaint marshmellow falling out of the sky.Who pressed the "improbability drive" button?Overall,good flash,improves graphics(unless this is how you are keeping it)and add some more blood and frames of action.Good luck on any future flash you will be making.

[Madness Elimination 5]

Another good one

It looks really good,though,I would recommand something.Try to fix up the comp issues,and fix some of the things up,and if you can't,buy a new computer,and send and email enclosed with your work so you could pick it up from there.I also noticed that it is wuite slow,even at medium quality,at least for me.If you even get around to fixing glitches,I would ay try to stretch the final fight scene,I mena all it is is the "E"just coming back and the gangleader running away being cut in half.Also,how did t his get out so early?I never knew just today I would find it scrolling though watching movies to find this.Anyways the review:

Very good movie,quality is good too.Graphics,not too bad,but a little shabby.Just the glitches and the poor amount of blood make this a little less enjoyable.The BG's are very high quality,also the enemies!Style,the same style as always,your style.Sound,great song,fits in great,but now I can't get it out of my head.Voilence,not that good,because of the blood loss,try to fix that up.Interactivity,good menu like always,but couldn't you at least introduce Mr.???(you know the "guy"?)Humor,just a small piece when he was about to hit the deploy gravy part,and the fact of a "deploy gravy" button being there.Overall,really good.Graphics and most things are good,but I'm sad that that's the end of the Elimination series.Anyways,fix up the glitches(if you can)and good luck on your future flash.

[Let me go down the stairs]

Resubbmitting

Resubbmitting this,how much?Well I guess you are full of shit.

tuan69 responds:

hey fucker-man, go shove that dildo up your ass.

[CRAPPY FLASH MOVIE!!!!!!]

Pretty good,and I agree

I agree with that one reviewer that said,"I person could go insane watching the stuff you submit".To tell the truth,I nearly went insane,for real,I felt so strange after this,I wanted to kill myself,but I did not,I can keep a sanity,but if I watch any more of this stuff I think I'm going to go insane and come to your house and kill YOU,but I'll saty away from your movie so that does not happen.
ANYWAYS,the review:

This was ok on my scale.Graphics,good but adding some color and more blood might make it better,style,pretty much the same,cute looking B&W chars and rape or killing or some strange mix of the both,sound,good songs,would be good to add sound though,voilence,hell yes,but not that good of a job,because it is just some guy slahing and tearing people aprt with his hands and a knife thing,maybe some guns?Interactivity,add a play buuton,instead of a movie strting right out of the blue.Humor,nothing more than killing,no humor as far as I can see.
Overall,good flash,though the quality and the overall looking leads to it's small demise.Maybe in the next flashes you will be making,you could add some color,a play button,and sound?Or just edit this one?Anyways,good luck on further flash you might make.

[The Best Flash Movie Eva]

I feel gay!

That made me feel gay!And I find this"offensive"to me, but of course I need to click the link, to give ya more hit and view and what such,not the best of animation but still sorta.....I really can't say.

P.S.That made me feel gay!

[DERAILED]

Very good,now I am scared to ride trains

Wow,that really was cool,I don'tknow what derailing is,but this was a good movie.Graphics,very good,but disturbing(the guy scooping up his organs)style,gosh darn good,sound,perfect,and nicely in sync with things,voilence,hell yeah!Interactivity,Strange replay button and a reg play button,humor,none really.Overall this was really good,though now I feel really scared to ride a train*shudders*.